Commentaries - May 2011

  "attack of the difficult poems" … is a great book!  you must read this book!  it will provide you with an education about what is happening, has been happening, in the world of post modern poetry and why it is important for everyone to pay attention to it, important socially, personally, religiously.  also very funny (the book is funny) and brilliant and a pleasure to read.  i was sad when i finished it, but well, isn't this always what happens. …

charles is always so funny and so astute about the poetry wars, who is up, who is down, and who is controlling the game.  in fact, as he says, no one is paying any attention to poetry - at least to the poetry charles and i would value.  a nod is given in the press and in the public to something called "poetry" and i guess it actually is poetry of some kind but mostly limited to sincere and personal statements of grief, beauty, query, etc.  a little vignette or a moment of epiphany. 

of course there's nothing wrong with this!  but more interesting to me is a poetry that problematizes everything - the poet, the poem, the language itself.  because if you are actually looking closely it becomes clear that all these things really are problems and what's a poem to do if not look closely? anyway, this is my theory.  actually it's not a theory.  i just can't help it.  i have never minded that no one is paying attention to the poems i write.  a few are and that's all right.  but charles is a professional culture warrior (and worrier) so he pays attention to that and fights for his (our) place in the sun, so to speak, and complains about it, makes fun of those who seem not to have a clue about what he and the rest of us are up to.  of course it's more than merely about him/us.  it's also an argument for another world, a more human and humane world, with more honesty and humor, more love, less self-centeredness.  moving away from what he has for years called "official verse culture" to that.  great interview with the astute marjorie perloff.  between the two of them in this interview i think pretty much everything in the literary/cultural world is covered and known. also hilarious.

 source: everday zen: 4/9/11 and 5/21/11

Recently received for review

Among the joys of working as the reviews editor for a poetry magazine that has international readers and writers: packages of books you probably won't find in any domestic bookstore. Since the beginnning of May, Jacket2 has received new titles from presses including Shearsman (UK), Fremantle Press (AU), Brick Books (CA) and Reality Street (UK):

In the Common Dream of George Oppen by Joseph Bradshaw (Shearsman 2011)
At the Point by Joseph Massey (Shearsman 2011)
The Name of This Intersection is Frost by Maryrose Larkin (Shearsman 2011)
Ficticia by Maria Baranda trans. Joshua Edwards (Shearsman 2011)
to be continued by Anne Blonstein (Shearsman 2011)
Divining for Starters by Carrie Etter (Shearsman 2011)
Sleepwalking with Orpheus by Craig Watson (Shearsman 2011)
The Derbyshire Poems by Peter Riley (Shearsman 2011)
The Perforated Map by Elena Rivera (Shearsman 2011)
black seeds on a white dish by Shira Dentz (Shearsman 2011)
I-Formation (Book 1) by Anne Gorrick (Shearsman 2011)
Collected Poems by Karin Lessing (Shearsman 2011)
Poems 2006-2009 by Christopher Middleton (Shearsman 2011)

Fremantle Poets 2: Two Poets
by Kevin Gillam and Andrew Lansdown (Fremantle 2011)
The Moving World by Michael Heald (Fremantle 2011)
The Argument by Tracy Ryan (Fremantle 2011)

Sharawadji by Brian Henderson (Brick Books 2011)
Outskirts by Sue Goyette (Brick Books 2011)
Girlwood by Jennifer Still (Brick Books 2011)
The Truth of Houses by Ann Scowcroft (Brick Books 2011)

Plants by James Davies (Reality Street 2011)
Occasionals by Carol Watts (Reality Street 2011)

Two photos by Alan Thomas, June 15, 2011, Los Angeles





Alan Thomas is the edtior at Universtiy of Chicaog Press of Antin's Radical Coherency, Perloff's Unoriginal Genious,  and Bernstein's Attack of the Difficult Poems.

Fractures of the self: a review of "Radical Coherency"

David Antin Radical Coherency: Selected Essays on Art and Literature, 1966 to 2005 (Chicago: University of Chicago Press, 2011)
(detail of cover pictured)

reviewed by Douglas Messerli

One of the first things anyone approaching David Antin's marvelous new collection of essays on art and literature will notice is the striking image on the book's cover, a photograph that depicts David Antin, looking perhaps a bit more Buddha-like than in does in real-life, walking toward another image of himself, this from the back side of the face. There is something arresting about this image, even a bit eerie, but I made little of it when I first saw it, except to register that it represented an image of the author, symbolically speaking, of 1966 coming towards his current being. A few friends, however, found that image quite disturbing, one suggesting he had to keep the book face down on his coffee table. Perhaps it was just the oddity of having a photograph, which we associate with the real world, representing something that we know cannot truly happen, one aspect of self meeting up with the other.

Yet, if we read on in Antin's book, particularly in his essay "The Beggar and the King," we recognize that this transaction between two aspects of the self is precisely what the author projects as being behind the narrative genre he has created in the "talk poem." Speaking of his early work, generated by a kind of collage sensibility, Antin observes:

...I started out in the 1950s like many young experimental artists with a strong commitment to most of the received ideas of early twentieth-century modernism, the most important of which for an artist was the idea of the exhaustion, experimental and aesthetic, of representation in all its forms. For a language artist this mostly meant the uselessness of narrative.

Antin goes on to suggest that over the years, as he recognized the exhaustion "of nearly all the modes of experimental communication," that he began to reexamine narrative, exploring worlds of folklorists and ethnographers (the Grimm brothers, Afansiev, etc.) as well as V. Propp's structural study The Morphology of the Folktale, and others as far-reaching as Zuni Tales and Bernardino de Sahagun's definitions compiled from survivors of the Aztec culture. What Antin finally determined is that some narratives are not stories, and some stories have no narrative, coming eventually to articulate a definition of narrative:

a narrative requires a sense of something at stake for somebody in some particular subject position, which is what characterizes the stake. It is this sense of stake that should be taken as the center of narrative.

Like dreams, Antin argues, narratives build bridges across change.

The act of reconnecting subject positions across the gulf of change is what constitutes the formation of self. All self is built over the threat of change. There can be no self until there is an awareness of one's subject position, which can only be created by the threat of change or the memory of change. Every change creates a fracture between successive subject states, that narrative attempts and fails to heal. The self is formed over these cracks. Every self is multiply fractured, and narrative traversal of these fracture planes defines the self. Narrative is the traditional and indispensable instrument of self creation.

It is this definition of narrative and Antin's own exploration of that genre in his "talk poems" that came eventually to define his art. One must understand the picture on the cover, accordingly, not just as an encounter of an older Antin with a newer one, but one kind of self facing the spectre of another and redefining that vision of self in the process. And in that sense, the image on the cover is a slightly disturbing vision of these two selves coming together almost to duke it out over the changes that have obviously occurred in the writer's own life, one might say, another kind of "radical coherency." Yet I was struck in these revelatory essays, at how much continuity Antin demonstrates in a writing that bridges 39 years. There are only four works that actually fit the format of what the author describes as "talk poems" here ("the existential allegory of the rothko chapel," the title piece, "radical coherency," "the death of the hired man", and "john cage uncaged is still cagey," although Antin tells me that "Fine Furs" was originally written in the form, but later transformed into an essay), but I would argue that all of the pieces in this volume have the same Antin inflections of voice and structural patterns as his later works. Antin's is a voice filled with pauses, not always at the place one might suspect, but as in Stein, always there as part of the syntax itself. These caesuras are a product of Antin's whole process, which is so different from most critical writing that it is sometimes difficult to think of Antin setting out to write an "essay" For Antin does not "answer" anything, but poses of each artist, poet or groups of these, questions which he then ponders and pauses over in sentence after sentence, wandering and wondering aloud in astoundingly profound ways, how and why certain things are being said or done. Occasionally, for Antin is a true wit, these can be somewhat whimsical—in "Warhol: The Silver Tenement," for example, Antin's major summary is that in order for Warhol's beautiful creations to succeed, they must necessarily develop "scuffs," transforming his paintings, films, novels, soap operas, and even his planned "silver tenement" into a kind of "precisely pinpointed defectiveness," a kind of tawdry version of glamour—but by and large, no matter what his own position about the quality or purposefulness of the various art and poetic endeavors upon which he focuses, Antin asks serious questions, challenges set notions, and makes us rethink our assumptions.

 In order to cover a large range of territory, Antin has clearly winnowed down what was to have been a far bigger book with numerous other essays (sometimes on the same artist at different periods in his or her career) into a whole that explores various aspects of the art scene from the mid-1960s through today. From Pop art, Antin moves on to the new representational work of artists like Alex Katz, taking out time in a wonderfully, slightly daffy piece to consider the work of machine-builders such as Jean Tinguely, before turning his attention to a "Pollution Show" in Oakland, California, consisting of photographs, drawings, kinetic junk sculpture, funk, discreet piles of rubbish, and even a dead seagull.

 From these "earthwork" pieces, the author turns his attention to different kinds and traditions of constructivism and the issues of flatness in contemporary art, moving through Sol Lewitt, Robert Irwin, Michael Asher, Carl Andre and others. This is followed by a bruising criticism of the famed "Art and Technology," show, organized by Maurice Tuchman at the Los Angeles County Museum of Art in 1971. Later essays include discussions of video art, a hilarious consideration—using the example of artist Robert Morris—of how one might comprehend the "proprietary rights" of an artist, followed by a sensitive evaluation of the color fields of Rothko's art in Houston's Rothko Chapel, often viewed under the light of clouded skies, and ending with a reevaluation of performance artist Allan Kaprow. In short, Antin's writing serves almost as a textbook, without textbook-like presentations and conclusions, of what art meant throughout the 1960s and 1970s.

 I should add that not only can I hear Antin's voice in all these pieces but I perceive his various viewpoints as splendidly personal appreciations or disparagements. Reading Antin on art is as if one were accompanying a lively friend or uncle on trips to the museums and galleries throughout the country over a period of several years, the only way one can truly come to know and appreciate art.

 Miraculously Antin does the same thing for literature, beginning with a substantial essay exploring issues of modernism and postmodernism in American poetry long before, 1972, anyone else had thoroughly considered these issues in depth. I remember sitting in Marjorie Perloff's class—Marjorie being one of Antin's first major critical supporters—four years later, where we still hadn't accepted the idea of there being a "postmodern" poetry. Antin was there first! His "Some Questions about Modernism" bravely explores, again long before it had been done by others, notions of different kinds of modernism, opening up all kinds of literary texts that move away from the Pound-Williams-Eliot-Stevens kind of poetic genealogy.

 Radical Coherency humorously discusses the concept through a visit to a large shopping mall store where he attempts to help his elderly mother pick out some undergarments, priced at the amount she has been used to paying for years. That metaphor, of bargain shops within large clothing sections, striated by aisles and aisles of other ready-to-purchase goods, probably does more to explain what we might mean by a coherent thing that has radically exploded to contain all sorts of strange categories and subdivisions to meet the needs of contemporary culture.

 Essays like "The Stranger at the Door," the already-discussed "The Beggar and the King," and "Fine Furs," open up the whole notion of what a poem is or might be understood to be. In one of the funniest works of the entire book, "the death of the hired hand," Antin deconstructs some of the poetry of Robert Frost (and incidentally, of my artist acquaintance, Siah Armajani's poetry room, in which Antin speaks). Antin's discussion of the kind of dishonesty—a "wearing of hats" as he terms it—of Frost's diction and poetic positioning will forever change, I can assure you, the way you see this plain carpenter of imitative New England poetic dialogues.

The penultimate essay is a brilliant reconsideration of Wittgenstein's work in the context of some critics' contention that his philosophical studies are also works of poetry. Antin dares to ask and attempts to explain just what that poetry might consist of, and how, sometimes rather strangely, it functions as such. In the last essay, "john cage uncaged is still cagey," Antin takes on work that has perhaps been very influential to his own writing, suggesting how the performances of this "cagey" composer, collector of mushrooms, and sometimes unofficial manager of Merce Cunningham's dance company, function as poetic events.

 There are a few minor quibbles with Antin's book, namely concerning the lack of information the author provides about some of the artists and events on which he writes. It would be useful to know the names and places of the shows he reviewed, in one case in particular, Antin, a close friend of the artist, does not ever mention Allan (Kaprow's) last name! It occurs only in a footnote. But these are small matters that might have been ameliorated by more editorial involvement.

 The book as a whole is a stunning summary (although there are dozens of other works by Antin remaining to be republished) of one of our most engaging and challenging intellects. Radical Coherency is filled with the goods you can enjoy again and again.   

read more  Douglas Messerli at his Green Interger blog

Image by Eric Baus

This playlist is comprised of recordings related to questions. Bhanu Kapil, in her recent post on Harriet, Notes on Mutation, asks: “What is a question? How do questions work in your writing?  What do they perform?  What happens when you ask them?”  Today’s commentary might be considered an appendix to Kapil’s post, paying particular attention to the relationship between composition strategies, recording technology, and public performance. I’m also interested in grouping these recordings together in a playlist so that the questions from one piece might circulate through the others.

I’ll begin by quoting more from Kapil’s notes: “A question: Literally, it’s a way of gathering information but not of processing it.  As a mode of enquiry that’s also, linguistically, founded on doubt, on not having the words for what happens at the end of a relationship, the question seals space*.” I have excerpted a portion of Kapil’s comments contextualizing her own book of questions, The Vertical Interrogation of Strangers, from her Kelsey Street Press audio page. At one point in her discussion, Kapil describes the weaving together of the disparate material she has gathered from interviews as well as from her own answers to her questions as “a shared space for voices.”  On PennSound, you can listen to an excerpt from The Vertical Interrogation of Strangers recorded in 1999 at the Left Hand reading series in Boulder.

Jena Osman’s Series of Questions begins “There’s a voice in the room and what are you noticing?” Earlier in the reading, Osman mentions that most of the questions were composed a few hours before the reading. Recorded at the Segue Series in 2004, this piece seems composed with a specific space in mind while also considering the common experiences one has while listening to a live poetry reading. However, as a recording, the questions Osman asks also function to heighten the self-awareness of the listener beyond that site. When Osman asks “What kind of sound are you hearing beyond the voice that is sounding?” it cues the live listening audience into sonic elements one often seeks to filter out, such as people moving in and out of the room and the sound of traffic outside, but it also has a similar effect if, for example, one goes for a walk while listening to it on headphones or plays it on repeat in private at home. Questions such as “Is this its own performance or part of something else?” acknowledge the malleable qualities of the text and foreground process and presentational contexts. In her introductory comments, Osman quotes the artist William Kentridge. On Youtube, you can watch a video of Kentridge discussing process in his work.

Steve Benson’s 2003 reading at the Bowery Poetry Club explores similar issues in a series of live improvisations of questions. Many of the questions from this excerpt center around the role of expression in the work and the location and nature of the self  (“In what sense are you expressing yourself?”).  Some questions, such as “Why have you wrestled me to the floor like this?” and “Have you found your hat yet?” suggest imaginary scenarios that allow listeners to drift off and fill in the missing information. I’m especially interested in the pacing, the pauses, and the sonic manifestations of cognitive holding patterns such as “um” or “uh” that sometimes appear in questions such as: “Are those little [um] spikes peeking out from the sides?” You can hear the sound of Benson’s thinking marked in his intonational patterns.

 Tan Lin’s RPT from Seven Controlled Vocabularies, recorded on Close Listening in 2005, opens with the question “What is the relation between a fruit and a vegetable?” and moves into an oblique series of investigations into reading, repetition, substitution, duration, sensory experience, and forgetting. Lin punctuates the anecdote about eating at a restaurant with half-aphoristic, modular-seeming sentences such as: “Only things that are consumed endure beyond their shelf life.” After listening to the rest of the playlist, I heard this line in terms of the decay and re-contextualization of texts and sites of performance.

In this excerpt from her 2005 Close Listening reading and conversation with Charles Bernstein, Tracie Morris answers some questions about the relationship between composition and performance in her work. On PennSound you can hear From Slave Sho’ to Video a.k.a. Black but Beautiful, one of Morris’s sound installations from the 2002 Whitney Biennial Exhibition. The sound installation shifts and rearranges the words of a limited number of sentences so that they move between question and statement to critique perceptions of the body related to race and gender.

I will close with some excerpts from a 2004 interview on Cross-Cultural Poetics with Rosmarie Waldrop, in which she discusses Edmond Jabes’s The Book of Questions with the program’s host Leonard Schwartz. Listen to Waldrop’s initial comments on Jabes. Listen to Waldrop read an excerpt from the first installment of The Book of Questions.